One day I was just so mad I ran away. I ran down the down the street and turned left. It was my secret run away spot. It was under this big tree. When I’m there I just sit under the shady tree. I hear the all the leaf blow away as I sit on the concert . I can smell the neighbors Baber Q it smells so good. My stomach starts to growls. I hear someone coming its my mom she starts to yell,” Shannon O Shannon.” I tried to hide by she sees me . I can see the anger as she stomps over to me. Than she gives me the long boring speech about how I shouldn’t run away. We walk home together and once I get home I have to go straight to my room where I stay there for an hour trying to tell her I have to go pee but she doesn’t believe me. Once I’m out we watch a movie together.
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This was a reallly good story.You may want to expand further on it though and maybe describe the tree, the surrondings,and a bunch of other details that would make it totally descriptive. good job though.
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