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Love and sacrifice (draft 1)




 

“Love is a sacrifice; and to sacrifice for Love’s sake is a joy. – St.” Josemaria Escriva

Love and sacrifice go together.  You typically will sacrifice things for the ones you love because you want to make them happy.  I think there are three types of love.  The first is the love between a mother and a child, the second is the love between a man and a woman, and the third is the love between friends.  For each one of these loves, there is a different level of sacrifice each person is willing to make but the most sacrifice is what a mother does for her child.  A mother sacrifices so much for her children.  They sacrifice money, time, and there life.

     

Mothers spent lots of money on their children for cloths, food, and other things.  My mother gets more clothes for me than she does for her. She makes sure my brother and sister and I are feed before she feeds herself. She also buys me allot of electronics and cool stuff so I can be happy.

 

 

Mothers also sacrifice time, they usually never get to hang out with there other friends because they have hang out with you, they take a lot of time taking you to your activities, or cheering you on at games. My mom even takes time to couch my brother and sisters soccer team. After all the stuff she does for us kids there is little time left for her.

 

 

And last but not least your moms would sacrifice their life. They love you so much that they would take their life for yours. They would not stop and think before jumping in the water if you were drowning. They would also jump in front of a bullet for you.

 

      Mothers sacrifice and love their children so much. I appreciate everything my mom has done for me and I love her so much I would do the things that she does for me. I think that my mom is the best mom in the world.



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   kimberleigh wrote @ December 17th, 2008 at 5:47 pm

shannon i think that you have a lot of trouble with spelling and sentance fluency so before you put your essays out there you or someone else should proofread for mistakes you did a great job of makeing this subject personal for you. i love the quote because it gives a really stroung opening. so if you fix some of your little mistakes here and there this will be a great essay.

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