Comments for shannonbms's Blog http://shannonbms.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Thu, 05 Feb 2009 22:39:56 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on Car Troubles by terry http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/2009/02/05/38/comment-page-1/#comment-9 terry Thu, 05 Feb 2009 22:39:56 +0000 http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/?p=38#comment-9 shannon um kinda short you could put more in to it go into lilly's thought more tell kind of her life story about her family friends just add to it devolope your characters make it interesting. shannon um kinda short you could put more in to it go into lilly’s thought more tell kind of her life story about her family friends just add to it devolope your characters make it interesting.

]]> Comment on Love and sacrifice (draft 1) by kimberleigh http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/2008/12/16/love-and-sacrifice/comment-page-1/#comment-8 kimberleigh Thu, 18 Dec 2008 00:47:12 +0000 http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/?p=35#comment-8 shannon i think that you have a lot of trouble with spelling and sentance fluency so before you put your essays out there you or someone else should proofread for mistakes you did a great job of makeing this subject personal for you. i love the quote because it gives a really stroung opening. so if you fix some of your little mistakes here and there this will be a great essay. shannon i think that you have a lot of trouble with spelling and sentance fluency so before you put your essays out there you or someone else should proofread for mistakes you did a great job of makeing this subject personal for you. i love the quote because it gives a really stroung opening. so if you fix some of your little mistakes here and there this will be a great essay.

]]> Comment on Run Away Spot by Sarah!** http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/2008/10/02/run-away-spot/comment-page-1/#comment-7 Sarah!** Fri, 21 Nov 2008 01:43:52 +0000 http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/?p=27#comment-7 This was a reallly good story.You may want to expand further on it though and maybe describe the tree, the surrondings,and a bunch of other details that would make it totally descriptive. good job though. :D This was a reallly good story.You may want to expand further on it though and maybe describe the tree, the surrondings,and a bunch of other details that would make it totally descriptive. good job though. :D

]]> Comment on I Was Named After A Movie by Ana$tA$$i@ http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/2008/09/02/story-of-how-i-got-my-name/comment-page-1/#comment-6 Ana$tA$$i@ Sun, 21 Sep 2008 16:51:01 +0000 http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/?p=22#comment-6 Shannon, that is so cool! I would love to be named after a movie, besides the disney one of Anastassia. I really want to watch this movie now! ;*) Shannon, that is so cool! I would love to be named after a movie, besides the disney one of Anastassia. I really want to watch this movie now! ;*)

]]> Comment on The Greatest Present by Ana$tA$$i@ http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/2008/09/18/the-greatest-present/comment-page-1/#comment-5 Ana$tA$$i@ Sun, 21 Sep 2008 16:48:43 +0000 http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/?p=23#comment-5 SHannon! I really liked this story because its almost like you wre telling it to me , personally. You use your voice really well when you write. My favorite part was when you were writing about how you got the first jump it made me laugh! :) SHannon!

I really liked this story because its almost like you wre telling it to me , personally. You use your voice really well when you write. My favorite part was when you were writing about how you got the first jump it made me laugh! :)

]]> Comment on I Was Named After A Movie by kimberleighbms http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/2008/09/02/story-of-how-i-got-my-name/comment-page-1/#comment-4 kimberleighbms Sat, 20 Sep 2008 04:21:56 +0000 http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/?p=22#comment-4 that is so cute shannon i love it i wouldnt even guess i have never heard of that movie mabey i will watch it that is so cute shannon i love it i wouldnt even guess i have never heard of that movie mabey i will watch it

]]> Comment on I Was Named After A Movie by zackbms http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/2008/09/02/story-of-how-i-got-my-name/comment-page-1/#comment-3 zackbms Fri, 19 Sep 2008 03:04:58 +0000 http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/?p=22#comment-3 This... is... AWESOMEEE This… is… AWESOMEEE

]]> Comment on this is my blog!!♥ by Ana$tA$$i@ http://shannonbms.edublogs.org/2008/08/26/hello-world/comment-page-1/#comment-2 Ana$tA$$i@ Sat, 30 Aug 2008 19:12:38 +0000 #comment-2 Hey shannon! whats up?!?!? <3 <3 <3 Hey shannon! whats up?!?!? <3 <3 <3

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